Script:
After watching our first draft trailer we decided that there wasn't enough dialogue. We watched a variety of trailers and decided to use the idea from 'The Woman In Black' and have a voice over rhyme about the story going on in the background.
The Woman In Black (2012)
We looked at the original rhyme from the 'The Woman In Black' trailer and changed the words in it to make it relevant to our trailer.
'The Woman In Black' rhyme:During afternoon tea,
theres a shift in the air, a bone trembling chill that tells you she's there. There are those who believe, the whole town is cursed, but the house in the marsh is by far the worst. What she wants is unknown, but she always comes back the specter of darkness, The Woman In Black. |
Our rhyme:After finding the picture,
theres a chill in the air, her presence is felt avoid her stare. Reflections in mirrors, begin to distort, the people in the house start to feel caught. In a waking nightmare, capture her aim for her unknown victims her blood, it shall stain |
(TS)